This is My Very First Piece.

[Guest]

This is a scene from the Jessica Elwood fanfic series I'm writing. It's the first piece I've ever really tried to do well. Hope you enjoy.

-pardon the size; had to use a digital camera-


EDIT: managed to change the deminsions. hope its a better fit now.

[Guest]

Well you got the body mass kinda thick, but other then that, you got everything else on the nose.

[Guest]

yeah, i think i got Jessica pretty good from the side. as for Steve, he's supposed to be a big guy. granted i didnt do the arch in the back, but other than that its what i was looking for.

thanx lots for your opinion. i think people hold back on me b/c i openly ask for critiques and they're not sure what to say. maybe its just me, oh well.

again, thanx JJ. oh, i've enjoyed your work in the writer's lounge. you and i seem to be the only regular posters there. :P

[Guest]

You're welcome, I have no critiques on my writting or drawings, but oh well. I like to know how to make my drawings and writting. So that's why I throw my opinion out there.