P.A.N.A.S. PawDraw

[Guest]

I ain't goint to write much. Here is a sample of my work. I have the coloured version in progress as I'm still learning with colors.

Viewers enjoy, and critiques are welcomed!

[Guest]

can't mutch give critique fer ye... but gotta say that you have skills on drawing

[Cheetah]

From what I can see, your doing quite nicely, that a very cute character, and the lines seem good and I like the pose... So I hope you plan to stick around with a us a but..


Cheetah

[Ro]

okay, this is pritty cool.. nice pose and gives a happy feeling

critique, eh? I have a few things

1) your basic head shape is very good and I love the ears and muzzle but you need to construct the mouth more..
well.. you actually just need to move it a bit, same with the nose.

it minor things but if its in the face its important.

2) her right arm needs some overlapping.

3) shes leaning a bit to one side and it makes her fall to that side.
make sure to sketch the leg roughly even if you don't need then in the final picture, just to make sure the pose is stable.

4) last thing, her boobs are nice, but you could make then hang more she looks like she has a bra on..
not that thats a bad thing.. I guess its more of a style/taste thing

I did a fix on your drawing showing what I meen I hope its okay

[Cheetah]

but them not hanging so much gives her nice small hand full boobs... mmmmmmmmmuuuurrrr heheheeh I love small boobs... LOL!

Ok enough perverted cheetah...


`out

[Ro]

hehehe *hugs the big cat*.. I fully agree, small boobs fo da win woohooo

but like I noted you don't -need- to make 'em hang depending on what you want

[Nafruf]

Sunflower earring? hehe sweet Hmm I dunno if larger breasts would work on her frame, they look kinda just right ya know?

I see what you are saying though, they are hanging close, I dunno, maybe theyre perky?

[Guest]

Thanks for the tricktips RO. Will apply them for future works.

I knew there was something bit off with her right arm. Alas, I already done my colourwork before I check the forum. So here she is in full colour.

Oh yeah, btw I'm not going to be too active in the next two months. You will see my occasional works by that time.

[Coco]

Cool, nice sexible picture.

[Guest]

i do agree with ro about the position of the body and mouth.
it does look like she is about to fall over or something.
other than that it is a great pic
great job

[Coco]

Yeah, keep up the good work.

[Guest]

The thing you see about her pose that seems about to drop. That's because I didn't repositioned sketch after the scan though.

Anyway will be absent for while + caught flu (Not bird flu I hope).