I need some Opinions. . .

[Guest]

Hi guys, sorry, it's been like. . I think a YEAR since I stopped going on the forum. ;w; *fwaps herself*

I put these two up recently in my Jab gallery, but then I remembered you can't comment in those, A DUR! ;;;

Anyways, could anyone give me some tips or any kind of critique for these? Would be greatly appreciated.

[Nafruf]

Hmm, I am never good at being able to explain things, I am not familiar with the lingo, but one thing I could say is maybe a tad smaller penis size, although that is more a fetish thing than art style, lets face it I suck

[Ro]

critique?... sorry.. but I thing its awesome as is really cool.. and HOT!

and dont listen to Naf.. the penises are just the right size

[Guest]

I can give some critic on this if you like.

One on the first image, its that the head on this... pokemon? head is flat and dosent have the depth, add some cheeks and let the neck properly connect to will perhaps solve it, the sex is looking to not be in perspective with the crotch, for the sex its stright front shot, as the croth and hip is more from underneath so that would be sugested to draw it wrap down around the shafts head.

On second... i se same issue head feels flat and i sugest here mark out so one get the feeling there is another eye on the head, allso the ears in a difrtent perspectve as the face is, face is in profile and the ears is mroe tilted toward the veuver, on the leggs there is a impression there is no lower legg so add something there to give some depth would be good,
allso the chains is lacking depth, so calculate and use guilde lines form a vanish point and draw them based of that can healp.

Overall i woudl sugest to you study more on draw heads in varius perspectives and se how it loosk in every angle, and aollso learn to draw bodies asa 3dimentional object, and last perspectives to make thing slook belivable.