backwalk November 2nd 2016
Poor Timmantha! There is a powerful story going on with all the cute little lolis. She's in denial, and poor Juniper can't comfort her. Don't know what I like more: The girls (love the bare feet, as you know) or the storyline.
fairyslayer November 1st 2016
First off, great job on the action as Juniper lands and it transitions into story development – quite powerfully. Timmantha's intense reaction finding herself so close to Juniper is fantastic; her breakdown plays out perfectly for having just been raped by those she more-or-less trusted. The pain, the shock and the shame are too much, and you portrayed it perfectly. I also love how Juniper's look of surprise turns sadness as she's suddenly helpless to protect Timmantha from the terrible memories
November 2nd 2016
Poor Timmantha! There is a powerful story going on with all the cute little lolis. She's in denial, and poor Juniper can't comfort her. Don't know what I like more: The girls (love the bare feet, as you know) or the storyline.
November 1st 2016
First off, great job on the action as Juniper lands and it transitions into story development – quite powerfully. Timmantha's intense reaction finding herself so close to Juniper is fantastic; her breakdown plays out perfectly for having just been raped by those she more-or-less trusted. The pain, the shock and the shame are too much, and you portrayed it perfectly. I also love how Juniper's look of surprise turns sadness as she's suddenly helpless to protect Timmantha from the terrible memories