Anyway, the ending of 8/all of 9 were fantastic: the action and drama was as good as all the beautiful erotic artwork – though all of the naked sexiness contributes strongly to the story as well. Mindless, unashamed sex slaves standing idly by, apathetic, as Juniper is viciously raped (fucked and mindfucked) by the demon. Juniper's distraction technique was brilliant, both for giving Timmantha a chance to break in and also making tree lady think she'd succumbed. (Very helpful in the end!) The "tastes like goddamn sunshine!" cracked me up pretty hard too. The prolonged, sensual dubcon(-ish) was a wonderful treat as well.
Timmantha's brave move was a great part too, and even better that she made it. Good thing Cosmo was able to break out of the demon's grasp so easily at that point. Was it because he was in his refractory period, or is it just that mind control isn't that effective when someone has a pretty weak mind to begin with?
Cosmo's "constructions" were awesome, and nice that it was just enough for the Te Xuan Ze to come back into action… though it was really weird that she took time to get dressed first. 
The next morning was cute, with all of the sore (yet hopefully not pregnant) campers; and of course smart of Juniper to withhold some information to Ray Ray. That last bit of intrigue about the tree demon was pretty cool too. Mystery is always good, and it'll be interesting to see Juniper's hunt.
Chapter 10 opens fantastically, especially with the good clues as to the imposter. Nice use of her quirk and a great call-back to the bus ride to camp, though I also feel really sorry for Veronica at the same time. Even if the whole thing totally sucks for her it is nice to see that a few people really care about her, especially that one card from Timmy. It's a wonderful detail.
Thanks for more of your awesome storytelling and amazing art to go with it.
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